sturdycoldsteel: (explaining)
sturdycoldsteel ([personal profile] sturdycoldsteel) wrote in [community profile] alicornutopia 2015-10-14 12:17 am (UTC)

Prepositions and conjugation give Steel some trouble. Vocabulary mostly does not.

When they're far away enough to be clear of any lingering fog, she stares at the closer of the two small moons. "I can tell where the planet is easily from here, it's a circle of bluestream-fog. But if the moons have any, it's incredibly thin."

She makes a few steam-things. "Anything too distant from the ship just... Collapses into fog that spreads out into nothingness immediately. If I go closer, it holds together a little longer. The lightball I made inside the ship is steadily wearing away at the edges, too, but it's not drifting around."

She walks a few feet. "...That completely destroyed the lightball. At home they can last for months before needing shoring up, even if you walk through them all the time."

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